DOWN
Like two kittens in a burlap bag
we scrabbled for each other
against the warm fur we shared,
drawing blood with sounds
like purring as we sank.
DOWN
Like two kittens in a burlap bag
we scrabbled for each other
against the warm fur we shared,
drawing blood with sounds
like purring as we sank.
choosing medical career; problem faced by doctors; drawbacks of medical profession;patient tutorials
Cries from Jamaica
A place where I post unscripted, unedited, soulless rants of a insomniac madman
CHOOSE LOVE
My Life And Everything Within It
Just Here Secretly Figuring Out My Gender
A Watering Hole for Freelance Human Beings Who Still Give a Damn
"The only thing that stands between you and your dream is the will to try and the belief that it is actually possible." - Joel Brown
because life does not kill you right away
Seeking Dialogue to Inform, Enlighten, and/or Amuse You and Me
New Beginnings and Endings After and Before KATiE MiA Aghogday!
Medi(t)ating between the wor(l)ds
Journey of Creative Enlightenment
A leap beyond cultural boundaries
the world turns on a word
You - philosophical, thoughtful, witty. Me - still thinks fart jokes are funny. We should DEFINITELY get together!
That’s a great first line – sets us up for the disaster to follow. 🙂
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Thanks. I got flustered after I submitted that line and feared I’d done it wrong so I added something to go with them later. I’m technically disadvantaged.
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A rousing rendezvous!
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Thanks…I’ve been away too long!
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A rousing rendezvous!
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First line … awesome, drawing me in. Rest of lines equally as wonderful. Cheers.
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Thank you. I’m just feeling my way here. Been away awhile.
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Cats fighting in a burlap sack usually ends one way….. messy! Glad you’re back, Nan.
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Thanks, good to be back.
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You’re welcome.
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Whammo~ Line #1 is just the first of 5 great lines. Salute!
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I appreciate it, Ron. Glad you’re still alive. I am too, so far…
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I appreciate it, Ron. Glad you’re still alive. I am too, so far…
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That great first line invites the reader to fall into the delightful clawing which follows. To share that warm fur.
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Thank you, Brendan!
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Wow! You had me on the first line for sure… eerily beautfiul!
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Many thanks!
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You are welcome!
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This is beautifully haunting! ❤️
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Thanks for the comment and the heart!
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Great first line, Nan. It’s good to see you here!
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Good to be back, thanks
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I am glad for the ending… the first line had me concerned about would happen.
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