DOWN
Like two kittens in a burlap bag
we scrabbled for each other
against the warm fur we shared,
drawing blood with sounds
like purring as we sank.
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DOWN
Like two kittens in a burlap bag
we scrabbled for each other
against the warm fur we shared,
drawing blood with sounds
like purring as we sank.
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That’s a great first line – sets us up for the disaster to follow. 🙂
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Thanks. I got flustered after I submitted that line and feared I’d done it wrong so I added something to go with them later. I’m technically disadvantaged.
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A rousing rendezvous!
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Thanks…I’ve been away too long!
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A rousing rendezvous!
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First line … awesome, drawing me in. Rest of lines equally as wonderful. Cheers.
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Thank you. I’m just feeling my way here. Been away awhile.
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Cats fighting in a burlap sack usually ends one way….. messy! Glad you’re back, Nan.
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Thanks, good to be back.
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You’re welcome.
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Whammo~ Line #1 is just the first of 5 great lines. Salute!
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I appreciate it, Ron. Glad you’re still alive. I am too, so far…
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I appreciate it, Ron. Glad you’re still alive. I am too, so far…
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That great first line invites the reader to fall into the delightful clawing which follows. To share that warm fur.
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Thank you, Brendan!
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Wow! You had me on the first line for sure… eerily beautfiul!
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Many thanks!
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You are welcome!
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This is beautifully haunting! ❤️
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Thanks for the comment and the heart!
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Great first line, Nan. It’s good to see you here!
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Good to be back, thanks
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I am glad for the ending… the first line had me concerned about would happen.
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