REPEATING LINE

 

A REPEATING LINE  for d.Verse

repeating line– what’s worth repeating…

Sit up straight!

Don’t talk with your mouth full.

Don’t drag your feet.

Eat all your veggies.

If they weren’t worth repeating

why did we hear them so often?

 

A repeating line might just a well be

I love to hear you sing.

You’re so gentle with the baby.

Your drawing looks just like us.

I’m so proud of you.

What’s worth repeating?

 

Food for thought:

What do I  say that’s

worth repeating?

About Nan Mykel

At 79, I was just about to stop keeping a journal, but that felt like accepting that growth was finished. I don't want to be finished, yet! I'm 80 now, and struggling to communicate with you, if you'll come and set awhile. P.S. My how time flies! I'm 82 now.
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13 Responses to REPEATING LINE

  1. Oh, this brought back memories. And I especially love where you took it in the second stanza. Bravo. I’ll see if I can link you.

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  2. bethanyk says:

    Love. Definitely love.

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  3. sanaarizvi says:

    This is soo much fun 😀

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  4. Ah.. what’s worth repeating… repetition in praise is never nagging I guess, but could be just as bad.

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  5. This is incredible writing. 🙂

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