PRETTY IS AS PRETTY DOES

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 HAIKU

Lovely to look at

                                                churning cotton candy

                                                     adder well hidden

About Nan Mykel

At 79, I was just about to stop keeping a journal, but that felt like accepting that growth was finished. I don't want to be finished, yet! I'm 80 now, and struggling to communicate with you, if you'll come and set awhile. P.S. My how time flies! I'm 82 now.
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6 Responses to PRETTY IS AS PRETTY DOES

  1. Did you mean this as a haiku Nan? Even if you didn’t it works as one. Well done!

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  2. In English, the haiku is arranged in three lines, not one line as in Japanese. And, also in English, there’s a very big debate whether we should try and count our syllables the same way the Japanese do, it being two very different languages. So the six syllables in the 2nd line isn’t serious at all. You get the idea of haiku though, very well written.

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