Goodbye before we’ve met.
How fair is that? I’ll miss not
knowing you, and yet
suspect that further down the bar
a surprise awaits us both.
Goodbye before we’ve met.
How fair is that? I’ll miss not
knowing you, and yet
suspect that further down the bar
a surprise awaits us both.
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Hmmm.. makes me want to find out what happened next?
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Me too!
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Love this, when’s part two x
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I agree, your poem leaves us with a beautiful longing to know more 🙂
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I think that’s the kind of surprise that often waits us… we would like to know don’t we… that’s why we stay till closing time.
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Loved this Nan!
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ah…..the people we don’t know who walk by, sit further down the bar, ride up or down an elevator with us…….wondering who they be…
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Indeed, there’s no knowing how many surprises in life have started that very way, some good and some not so much
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Such a true statement, Nan. No one know what awaits them and the surprise is in being surprised by that fact. A sweet piece of poetics here!
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So mysterious! I want to know what is next, but I think that your poem is richer for leaving us wondering.
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Ah.. FeeLinG iN aLL thE wHoles oF
iMaginAtiOns DreAMs No liMits
oF wHere aLL thAT iS caN
Go t0 A next noW
heLLo oF bYes
thaT aRe
neVer tOld..
wHeReVer neveR
lAnd iS neveR eNdinG
storY oF no eXpectaTionS
noW oF Valley MounTain hiGh
LoW gRainS oF deSert sAnds WitH
mEmorY oF BeYond Eternity jUsT noW…:)
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